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I would like your opinions
I am new to all of this, so please bare with me. I was just contracted to publish my book of poetry, I am a first time author. My poetry focuses on my battles and overcoming of child abuse and anorexia. I would love some feed back. Below is a poem that will be in my book.
From black and white Into the light Is the story I yearn to tell I am not content But once I lived in hell
Abused and confused I nearly wasted away Now in a place of love A place that I will stay
A hospital bed where I laid my head Many years ago Was a home then A place Ill never go
Once confined to a chair I would sit and stare Looking out the window Wishing I were out there
Now that I am living free Which I thought I would never be This is the story I will tell Happiness is more appreciated once youve been to hell
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