Re: New author and book, The Blasphemous Bible.
"The entire King James bible rewritten and edited for common sense."
Wait, you did all this in a book that is only 496 pages? You must have edited out a lot out, or, like the compact Oxford English Dictionary, have four pages of text on each side of a page and include a magnifying glass?
Here's the King James text to compare to your version of the Song of Solomon above.
1 The song of songs, which is Solomon's.
2 Let him kiss me with the kisses of his mouth: for thy love is better than wine.
3 Because of the savour of thy good ointments thy name is as ointment poured forth, therefore do the virgins love thee.
4 Draw me, we will run after thee: the king hath brought me into his chambers: we will be glad and rejoice in thee, we will remember thy love more than wine: the upright love thee.
Uhhh well based on comparing these two snippets, I'm not sure what to make of your efforts at this point...
(BTW you posted two identical threads, I deleted one.)