New writer and my short stories!

[supers]

I am new to writing and would like people to read my short stories. I only have one and I publish them to inkitt here is my first story. https://www.inkitt.com/stories/other/970490

[Chris OConnor]

That's awesome that you're putting your work out there for the world to read. I wish you the best and hope people give your short stories a read.

[supers]

Sorry for the lat reply just trying to figure out how to reply. Thank you so much I am still new to writing but I have written four short stories in a google doc and two are still a work in progress. I have only published one and the other is in the process of being published. Not only do I want to be the next Stan Lee. I also just want people's imagination to spark and have fun reading them. The same way I felt and still feel about superhero stories. I just hope that one day my dream becomes a reality.

[supers]

I made a fan made Assassin's Creed story on the website provided in the first message. If you don't know what Assassin's Creed is go here https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Assassin%27s_Creed

[Pkopk]

Hi! Firstly, I'd like to mention I'm also new to writing. So don't feel threatened in the writing world, a lot of us are either new or still not confident as writers. Secondly, the only major comment I'd have about your story " demon & dog" , Is the lack of punctuation/ commas. I was giving a quick read through to find somewhere to suggest, and immediately saw the lack of comma's ! Comma's direct the reader and tell their head, HEY! I'm not talking about i enjoy cooking my family my dog and eating as well ! I'm talking about i enjoy cooking, my family, my dog, and eating as well! Comma's save lives my friend .

[supers]

Thank you. Sorry I did not say anything until now, I did not notice. I have been writing a lot here recently my favorite and newest one is Noah. I know I said it was for Assassin's Creed fans but it is still pretty good, and my best work so far. If you want to keep up with my stories then in the Demon & Dog story where it says Kaden, click on it. That will take you to all my stories.