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Author:  ReaderChris [ Sat Aug 03, 2019 1:53 am ]
Post subject:  Tonight, Alice Goes to Bed Early

Tonight, Alice Goes to Bed Early

Alice went to bed so late at night a few days ago. She got up late in the morning, and didn't feel good. She felt too fatigue to go to kindergarten...

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Author:  scottkimak [ Mon Oct 28, 2019 1:56 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Tonight, Alice Goes to Bed Early

Needs some editing

Author:  ReaderChris [ Wed Oct 30, 2019 5:27 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Tonight, Alice Goes to Bed Early

Dear Sir,

I am glad to hear from you.

You have given me sound advice, however, I'd like to know what kind of editing I need and how to achieve better results, as any idea from you would be greatly appreciated.

I am looking forward to your reply.

Yours Sincerely,
Author of http://www.earlybirdkid.com

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