Bojo A New Kind Of Super Hero

[dadinda]

Hi Everyone, I am looking for some feedback on my new book. Bojo is a new kind of super hero. Hew was born to parents that were from different creatures. His mother is a rabbit and his dad is a dragon. His family loved him very much. After he started school thing changed fro Bojo his was teased and attacked at school. As he grew and left home to help fight crime and protect the innocent Bojo always had a special place in his heart for bullie kids. I have attached some illustrations links and part of my book. Please let know what you think? I am on Indeigogo if any would like to check it out.

Under the large blue moon, two wonderful parents stood proud by their son’s crib watching him sleep peacefully. Bojo, the child, was created by the union of two different families: The Dragon and The Rabbit. George the Dragon met Martha the rabbit one night under a cherry tree and the two became fast friends. It wasn’t much longer before the two were married and had a son, Bojo. Most children from two different creatures will either look like one parent, and Bojo looked like both his parents. His silky fur was a bright green, the color of his father’s scales. His long green ears flopped around but stayed up. At first Martha and George thought that he was just a green bunny until he turned five years old and grew his wings.

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