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Tonight, Alice Goes to Bed Early

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Tonight, Alice Goes to Bed Early

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Tonight, Alice Goes to Bed Early

Alice went to bed so late at night a few days ago. She got up late in the morning, and didn't feel good. She felt too fatigue to go to kindergarten...

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Re: Tonight, Alice Goes to Bed Early

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Needs some editing
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Re: Tonight, Alice Goes to Bed Early

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Dear Sir,

I am glad to hear from you.

You have given me sound advice, however, I'd like to know what kind of editing I need and how to achieve better results, as any idea from you would be greatly appreciated.

I am looking forward to your reply.

Yours Sincerely,
Author of http://www.earlybirdkid.com
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