I just started writing poetry (I'm more of a fiction writer)
but I hoped you could tell me what you thought
#1
I hold my friends like enemies
Letting my stone shelter sink into ruin
A desperate affair leaving my rock in shambles
I’m alone
The plains frighten me like the scared rabbit
Hiding beneath the ground in hopes for serenity
I peek my head out to burning cities
Smelling the smoke stained air
I seek peace
That frail dove that soars in the crossbeams of heaven
Leaving all on the ground in a state of tranquility
The sunbeams of hope pierce the doves downy wings
And through to the rock building it high into the firmament
i stand with my company
alone no more
#2
The calm before the torrent that will leave my heart in disarray
Hope is a silver lining aboard a ship of unwanted memories
I break away to nostalgia
The sun on the pavement
The pulsating beat of mothers hand in mine
Her laughter as she tweaks my buxom cheek
The vision weakens
I brace myself for impact
I’m coming home
#3
A calm inertia
Like bullets in pristine waters
carries me like the fallen leaves off of last years dying oak
The silence is overbearing
I find chaos in the serenity
The forest is painted before me with the hands of Picasso
Stuttering blues and greens
The colours remind me of summer
A summer spent in your arms
I lay back in remembrance
And hear your heartbeat beside me
well guys thats it for now
let me know what you think!
