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by BWM
Thu Oct 28, 2021 11:53 pm
Forum: A Passion for Poetry
Topic: A Favorite Poem
Replies: 177
Views: 133771

Re: A Favorite Poem

Osmond Kelly Ingram 1887 – 1917 Osmond KellyIngram entered the US Navy November 24, 1903. His ship, USSCassin was attacked by the German submarine U-61 off Ireland on October 15, 1917. Gunner's Mate First Class Ingram spotted the approaching torpedo, realized it would strike close by the ship's dept...
by BWM
Mon Oct 11, 2021 6:54 pm
Forum: A Passion for Poetry
Topic: One Moment
Replies: 12
Views: 6247

Re: One Moment

How about this for a collaborative effort: If the whole world I once could see All people of every land standing together free No man enslaved, no woman oppressed All children fed and warmly dressed Then to this moment might I say Linger awhile, so as this memory never fade away. The last line is st...
by BWM
Sat Oct 09, 2021 12:56 am
Forum: A Passion for Poetry
Topic: One Moment
Replies: 12
Views: 6247

Re: One Moment

If the whole world I once could see All people of every land standing together free Then to the moment might I say Linger awhile, and let this memory never fade away. Once you put the seed in my head Cattleman, I had to have a crack at it, didn't I. I think the last line is the weakest now. You coul...
by BWM
Fri Oct 08, 2021 1:38 am
Forum: A Passion for Poetry
Topic: One Moment
Replies: 12
Views: 6247

Re: One Moment

Posting something like that on FB would be a massive red flag for me, I would steer well clear if I was only an acquaintance, possibly Bi-polar. If it was a close friend or relative we'd be having words about a post like that though. As far as men like Trump go, that's you're classic bully; all fron...
by BWM
Thu Oct 07, 2021 5:23 pm
Forum: A Passion for Poetry
Topic: A Favorite Poem
Replies: 177
Views: 133771

Re: A Favorite Poem

As I've stated in a previous post, I got my love of poetry from the movie Genius. I also have a love of music, so the other day after watching the movie Star Girl featuring Grace Vanderwaal. I looked her up and downloaded some music. Her bio was promising, a child prodigy with an angelic voice and a...
by BWM
Wed Oct 06, 2021 6:33 am
Forum: A Passion for Poetry
Topic: A Favorite Poem
Replies: 177
Views: 133771

Re: A Favorite Poem

Out of all those Kiplings If is my favorite too, I also like Cells: pack-drill for me and a fortnight's C.B. For "drunk and resisting the Guard."
by BWM
Wed Oct 06, 2021 6:07 am
Forum: A Passion for Poetry
Topic: One Moment
Replies: 12
Views: 6247

Re: One Moment

So Goethe himself used free twice there, sorry I thought you were inspired by Goethe's play to write that yourself. You say it's Part one, but which scene? I'll see if the version I'm reading is translated the same.
by BWM
Tue Oct 05, 2021 4:55 am
Forum: Religion & Philosophy
Topic: Born atheist?
Replies: 31
Views: 10812

Re: Born atheist?

There is another side to this question that I didn't give thought to when I posted; that being born an Atheist in a brain chemistry sense is obviously nonsense, but what if you're born the child of a famous extremely outspoken Atheist and are brought up in a household where the subject is openly dis...
by BWM
Sun Oct 03, 2021 1:32 am
Forum: A Passion for Poetry
Topic: One Moment
Replies: 12
Views: 6247

Re: One Moment

It's not bad as it is, but using the word free twice in the same sentence; obviously a compromise. If it was mine and I wanted to improve it, I would run that line through my head every night, and eventually it will come. There's nothing like that feeling when you wake up, and the words just pop int...
by BWM
Sat Oct 02, 2021 1:14 am
Forum: A Passion for Poetry
Topic: One Moment
Replies: 12
Views: 6247

Re: One Moment

I like it, the second line could use some work. I've read all Goethe's poems, a few of them are great favorites of mine. But Goethe's Faust is a bit dreary and long for my liking, but if this is the sentiment you got from it, then maybe I should give it another look.

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