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got an idea from my response to "What would you ask darwin."

http://www.booktalk.org/post76263.html#p76263

Evolve this sentence.

Pack my box with twelve dozen jugs of liquor.

(From "Ella Minow Pea". One of the shortest possible sentences containing every letter of the alphabet.)

Add or remove one letter to make a new sentence. You can change punctuation any way you like, or capitolization. The only thing that matters is the letter change.

One iteration per post.
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Pack my bod' with twelve dozen jugs of liquor.

The demand of an alcoholic.
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Needs flexibility. More points for a single letter morph, less points for more letters(up to 3 at once). Cause some words are irreducibly complex. :lol:
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Alright.

let it hang loose a bit.

change a couple letters if it suits you, but know that we all judge you harshly. haha.
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Pack my boy with twelve dozen jugs of liquor.


I agree, there are a lot of words in this sentence that don't change well with only one letter
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Pack my boy with twelve dozen chugs of liquid.

The next change should be made to this sentence, not the original.
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Unpack my boy with twelve dozen chugs of red liquid.
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Unpack! my boy with twelve dozen chugs of red liquid.
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