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A poem that I wrote...

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bibliophile_18
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A poem that I wrote...

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I found an old poetry book that I have about half-filled. I decided to share one of them with everyone, since I haven't written any more down in a long time....

Angelwing

Blood drips down from
My curved blade.
The battle was won
From my Father's hate.
A devoted daughter no more,
A loyal wife forever,
This is the end of a war
And the final utterance of never.
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your poem

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I think your poem has powerful emotion in it.
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Oy!!! Bibliophile:-

Write some more down......Now!!!

If that was a poem written from experience...
I think I have shared your experience
and it is nice to know.......

GO ON!!!
Only those become weary of angling who bring nothing to it but the idea of catching fish.

He was born with the gift of laughter and a sense that the world is mad....

Rafael Sabatini
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