I've stopped working on this, lost motivation, and I have absolutely no idea how to improve my so called skills.

I'd appreciate some feedback.

Opinion I will not express, but I will be happy to read

Dennis Wolf wrote: ↑Sun May 14, 2023 4:19 pm I've stopped working on this, lost motivation, and I have absolutely no idea how to improve my so called skills.

I'd appreciate some feedback.

You're a better writer than I am so stick with it. I like how this reads. I'll try to finish it soon. But the first few pages are written well.

Wow.

I never actually expected a response, but thank you!

I've rewritten it from scratch since, because apparently I can't not write, it just keeps torturing me... Lol

Chris OConnor wrote: ↑Sat Mar 02, 2024 12:24 am

Dennis Wolf wrote: ↑Sun May 14, 2023 4:19 pm I've stopped working on this, lost motivation, and I have absolutely no idea how to improve my so called skills.

I'd appreciate some feedback.

You're a better writer than I am so stick with it. I like how this reads. I'll try to finish it soon. But the first few pages are written well.

Thank you.
I've never really expected a response, I was down a dark road when posting here. Well, actually... Who am I kidding, this whole creative thing is being down that dark road forever.

I've continued it, even rewritten some of the parts since..

Of course that was only thanks to finding an audience later on, that and these voices in my head, blissfully ignorant of my concerns, dictating their stories for me to scribble down.

I'll gladly donate to the site if I ever get published and make something of this constant urge to keep creating.
As I will to everyone who's helped me along.
If I fail, then it will have costed you all nothing but perhaps the interest put into the spectacle.

Cheers