Re: What do you think of this blurb?
my first response was "yeah that about sums up the current situation"
it seemed a reasonable blurb, but i did find myself wanting to reword it somehow, to remove that subtlest, ever so faint hint of cliche that seemed to seep through, it doesn't seem an easy task though, too much like hard work for me
The world has gone dark and alien weapons are in the hands of murderers.
In a world of secrets no one knows how (insert name of murderers from book here) got their hands on the strange new weapons.
aaarghhh writing is hard work