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Yay, I wrote a poem!

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TheAwkwardBotanist
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Yay, I wrote a poem!

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I need some helpful criticism with this poem... So thanks!

Title: We have time

We have time for our money
We have time for being pessimistic
We have time for entertainment
We have time for being rude
And we have time for never acknowledging people who need help

But we don't have time for being nice
Being generous
Being optimistic
And helping people who need it.

Maybe it's time to change our schedules.

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armenia2012
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I really like your poem. You can get ideas from poetrysoup.com. I encourage you to keep at it. You doing great!! You can also get ideas from my book Soup for the Soul of the Servant available on amazon in print and kindle. And another thing accept constructive criticism but let no one put you down.
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Thank you very much, I appreciate the feedback and I will definitely check out that website.
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