Edge of Eternity
Stand upon eternity;
at the edge of all that's real.
Look upon the iron clad,
and pluck it from the field.
This is just the fault line;
I don't think they want to steal.
Every sacred passage has a thorn to prick the skin,
but it doesn't really matter;
they don't ever let you in.
Pick another apple from the beggar's faulty tree.
Stand upon the fault line,
and watch the ages pass with me.
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Re: Edge of Eternity - Jeremy A Benson
JeremyBenson wrote:Edge of Eternity
Stand upon eternity;
at the edge of all that's real.
Look upon the iron clad,
and pluck it from the field.
This is just the fault line;
I don't think they want to steal.
Every sacred passage has a thorn to prick the skin,
but it doesn't really matter;
they don't ever let you in.
Pick another apple from the beggar's faulty tree.
Stand upon the fault line,
and watch the ages pass with me.
I think it has a real good rhythm going on. Something to get you ready for battle
Good stuff
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Re: Edge of Eternity - Jeremy A Benson
Also, I was disappointed that the video wasn't you speaking the poem.JeremyBenson wrote:Edge of Eternity
Stand upon eternity;
at the edge of all that's real.
Look upon the iron clad,
and pluck it from the field.
This is just the fault line;
I don't think they want to steal.
Every sacred passage has a thorn to prick the skin,
but it doesn't really matter;
they don't ever let you in.
Pick another apple from the beggar's faulty tree.
Stand upon the fault line,
and watch the ages pass with me.
I think if you also spoke the poem in your videos that would be great.
Poetry deserves to be heard aloud.
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Re: Edge of Eternity - Jeremy A Benson
I can only do that type of stuff when I'm completely alone... I live in an apartment building, and don't want people to hear me, lol... I was the same way when I made music, but glad that you enjoyed it to some degree
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JeremyBenson wrote:I can only do that type of stuff when I'm completely alone... I live in an apartment building, and don't want people to hear me, lol... I was the same way when I made music, but glad that you enjoyed it to some degree
I am the exact same way!
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lol, If I could get myself a nice digital recorder I'd go outside the city and record a bunch through the summer, haha.
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JeremyBenson wrote:lol, If I could get myself a nice digital recorder I'd go outside the city and record a bunch through the summer, haha.
Mmmm, I feel ya brother.