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Geeessee! Will anyone give my book a look?

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Re: Geeessee! Will anyone give my book a look?

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"As Jake listened to the old man speak in his native tongue, he was somehow reminded of the tinkling of flowing water, or the gentle murmur of the wind blowing through the bluestem grass. After the old man spoke to the woman for some time, she turned to Jake and said, "He say the dog will live for a time. He say dog is your brother and you are young, you having a bad time and need friend.""

This is damn good. Really good. Like first bite of dessert good.
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