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Snow, delicate light
Utility of winter
Snowbirds on lightlines
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Sun bright shadows short
Winter white, cardinal red
The snow delights me
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wonderful to see winter celebrated in verse

White moon, insight
Cool shadows flick fast, snakes right
Snow delicate, light
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New style new weather

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A change of weather.


Nimbus
Cumulous, grey
Ominously expanding skyward
Excitement of imminent downpour
Thunderhead
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Tangential as usual, I just wanted to share that I heard there was a Chinese poet who was beheaded for writing the poem:
Cool Breeze, you cannot read.
Why keep turning pages?
Perhaps not coincidentally, the characters for "cool breeze" were also those that stood for the name of the Emperor, who either could read or who had someone around him who could read, interpret and advise. I heard this as an undergraduate and I don't recall the name of the poet or the Emperor.
"Where can I find a man who has forgotten the words so that I can talk with him?"
-- Chuang-Tzu (c. 200 B.C.E.)
as quoted by Robert A. Burton
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What is haiku? Are the parameters close to what you guys have been writing? My thoughts run darker than what I read here, I'd be a downer.
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GentleReader9 wrote:. . . there was a Chinese poet who was beheaded for writing the poem:

Cool Breeze, you cannot read.
Why keep turning pages?
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Naming_taboo

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Literary_Inquisition
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Interbane wrote:What is haiku? Are the parameters close to what you guys have been writing? My thoughts run darker than what I read here, I'd be a downer.
Defining haiku:
First situation and then
realization

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Haiku
-- historical complexities

http://www.hsa-haiku.org/bradyawards/brady.htm#1988
-- modern simplicities
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Icing on the cake
Rich, smooth, delightfully sweet
Hats off to the chef!
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Eyeless in Gaza
Grinding grain for Dagon's cakes
Samson dreamed of snow
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