I would like feedback on my short story titled "Belle Façade". I have written it out and narrated it myself on YouTube. Please give it a read/listen.
https://youtu.be/_ELBlbu8orQ
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Belle Facade. (Short audio story)
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Belle Facade. (Short audio story)
Hello,
I would like feedback on my short story titled "Belle Façade". I have written it out and narrated it myself on YouTube. Please give it a read/listen.
https://youtu.be/_ELBlbu8orQ
I would like feedback on my short story titled "Belle Façade". I have written it out and narrated it myself on YouTube. Please give it a read/listen.
https://youtu.be/_ELBlbu8orQ
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