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A little sample of mine

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A little sample of mine

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I just finished playing the Walking Dead game and I got some inspiration to write this piece. It popped into my mind. I'm not entirely sure where I'm going with it.

But if you like, you can critique it and junk. Just be truthful and harsh :lol:

*Saintmaikeru*
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Fantastic, thanks. Love the oblique references scattered throughout.
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Very interestign vignette... Do you think you will expand it?

BTW, your writing style reminds me of Stephen King. (Intended as a compliment).
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Interbane wrote:Fantastic, thanks. Love the oblique references scattered throughout.

Thank you!
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Cattleman wrote:Very interestign vignette... Do you think you will expand it?

BTW, your writing style reminds me of Stephen King. (Intended as a compliment).

I think I might expand it. I am taking a little break from it.

And I was taking inspiration from Cormac Mccarthy :lol: but I'll take Stephen King as a compliment. Thank you!
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