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Contest: Haiku can you?
haiku contest
Here is the basic rule of haiku: three metrical phrases or lines of 5, 7, and 5 syllables. Generally, a haiku is a non-rhymed verse, conveying an image or feeling in two parts spread over three lines.
Some examples of haiku --
old pond . . .
a frog leaps in
water’s sound
As the wind does blow
Across the trees, I see the
Buds blooming in May
Contest Rules:
1. Haiku usually uses images from nature, often containing a seasonal reference. However, you can write on any subject.
2. You have 2 weeks to create and post. As the haiku poems are posted I will go in and number them to help with voting. End date for posting a haiku is Nov. 13, 2009
3. Then a week of voting, ending Nov. 20th.
Ready, Set, Go!
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“People usually consider walking on water or in thin air a miracle. But I think the real miracle is not to walk either on water or in thin air, but to walk on earth. Every day we are engaged in a miracle which we don’t even recognize: a blue sky, white clouds, green leaves, the black, curious eyes of a child — our own two eyes. All is a miracle.” -Thich Nhat Hahn
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I'll post about this on Facebook and hopefully we'll pull in some more participants. I'll make it clear that all entries have to be here in this thread to be considered.
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One by one leaves fly, Wild dervishes in the wind From the red truck bed
Edit: 11/27/09
As I reread my haiku, I had the thought it would be better in reverse.
From the red truck bed, Wild dervishes in the wind. One by one leaves fly.
_________________ " How we eat determines, to a considerable extent, how the world is used." - Wendell Berry, What Are People For?
“People usually consider walking on water or in thin air a miracle. But I think the real miracle is not to walk either on water or in thin air, but to walk on earth. Every day we are engaged in a miracle which we don’t even recognize: a blue sky, white clouds, green leaves, the black, curious eyes of a child — our own two eyes. All is a miracle.” -Thich Nhat Hahn
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What a great visual Saffron. I can picture those leaves flying off the truck bed very clearly. This is important to a haiku is it not, a clear image, or a feeling? Wow, what power a few lines can have.
I can also feel the friendship in catgirlmissy's piece. I'm looking forward to reading some more.
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Train station, waiting -
The first flake melts on pink skin.
Magical morning.
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Thanks for your entry, Krysondra. Snow is magical!
_________________ " How we eat determines, to a considerable extent, how the world is used." - Wendell Berry, What Are People For?
“People usually consider walking on water or in thin air a miracle. But I think the real miracle is not to walk either on water or in thin air, but to walk on earth. Every day we are engaged in a miracle which we don’t even recognize: a blue sky, white clouds, green leaves, the black, curious eyes of a child — our own two eyes. All is a miracle.” -Thich Nhat Hahn
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We have 4 entries, do I hear 5!
_________________ " How we eat determines, to a considerable extent, how the world is used." - Wendell Berry, What Are People For?
“People usually consider walking on water or in thin air a miracle. But I think the real miracle is not to walk either on water or in thin air, but to walk on earth. Every day we are engaged in a miracle which we don’t even recognize: a blue sky, white clouds, green leaves, the black, curious eyes of a child — our own two eyes. All is a miracle.” -Thich Nhat Hahn
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Re: Contest: Haiku can you?
Hey! Sorry I kinda fell off the face of the earth for a few weeks -- real estate gave me the heave hoe. I am now in my very own townhouse and with an internet connections. I'd like to give one more chance for the haiku contest. I will make a voting post in a few days. I believe Chris has given the okay for the winner to receive a book!
_________________ " How we eat determines, to a considerable extent, how the world is used." - Wendell Berry, What Are People For?
“People usually consider walking on water or in thin air a miracle. But I think the real miracle is not to walk either on water or in thin air, but to walk on earth. Every day we are engaged in a miracle which we don’t even recognize: a blue sky, white clouds, green leaves, the black, curious eyes of a child — our own two eyes. All is a miracle.” -Thich Nhat Hahn
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