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Does this book blurb grab you?

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Does this book blurb grab you?

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No nonsense Kate Mercer never thought she’d become a kept woman, but when she wants out of the arrangement with multi-millionaire, Carrington Grant, she finds herself in deadly danger. So she flees into the arms of her ex, Lamar Burton, a former NFL linebacker-turned-cop who harbors his own jealousies and misgivings. Will she be able to save her own life from a sworn enemy?
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Re: Does this book blurb grab you?

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Being honest in an effort to help... no, it does not. Is that a rough draft outline only? The storyline sounds interesting enough. The long run on sentence and grammar issues would deter me from buying. I am a HUGE supporter of Indie authors, but only if they put some effort into polishing their works into a professional, well written book.

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If you like humorous science fiction, I invite you to read Highway to the Stars: The Beginning by B.E. Wilson
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