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This is a song by The Band, written by Robbie Robertson
King Harvest (Has Surely Come)
Corn in the fields. Listen to the rice when the wind blows ‘cross the water... King Harvest has surely come.
I work for the union, ‘Cause she’s so good to me; And I’m bound to come out on top, That’s where she said I should be. I will hear every word the boss may say, For he’s the one who hands me down my pay. Looks like this time I’m gonna get to stay, I’m a union man, now, all the way.
The smell of the leaves, From the magnolia trees in the meadow... King Harvest has surely come.
Dry summer, then comes fall, Which I depend on most of all. Hey, rainmaker, can you hear the call? Please let these crops grow tall. Long enough I’ve been up on Skid Row; And it’s plain to see, I’ve nothing to show. I’m glad to pay those union dues, Just don’t judge me by my shoes.
Scarecrow and a yellow moon, Pretty soon a carnival on the edge of town... King Harvest has surely come.
Last year this time, wasn’t no joke, My whole barn went up in smoke. Our horse Jethro, well he went mad, And I can’t ever remember things being that bad. Then here comes a man with a paper and a pen, Telling us our hard times are about to end. And then, if they don’t give us what we like, He said, “Men, that’s when you gotta go on strike.”
Corn in the fields. Listen to the rice when the wind blows ‘cross the water... King Harvest has surely come.
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Perhaps I'm reading too much into this, but look at that last verse:
"Last year this time, wasn’t no joke, My whole barn went up in smoke. . . ."
This makes me think that the real reason the narrator has joined the union is because they burned his barn down as a scare tactic to get him to join. And the earlier lines, "I work for the union because she's been so good to me" and "I'm a union man now all the way" now come across as ironic. I'm so intrigued with this interpretation that I went off on the web, looking for more information.
Here, we have the Reason To Rock page:
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Given all of these variations from a normal chorus form, it may be better to view these lines as something else altogether. To me they seem to form another song that is combined with the central one. To use terms from William Blake’s poetry, it is as if we have a Song of Innocence intertwined with a Song of Experience. The haiku-like stanzas present the innocent perspective, focusing on simple sensual experiences of nature: the sound of the wind, the smell of the magnolia leaves, the vision of a yellow moon. And then the reference to “King Harvest,” a seemingly mythical symbol of the power of nature. All of these images work at a very simple, primitive level of consciousness, referring to timeless aspects of the natural world.
This effect is reinforced by the music. These three lines begin with simple, unadorned, hushed vocals, emphasizing the simplicity and naturalness of the images. When Levon Helm sings “Listen to the rice when the wind blows ‘cross the water,” we are waiting, expecting to hear something. Then, Levon Helm responds with a quiet, repeated, slightly rising tapping of his cymbal, mixed with Garth Hudson’s slowly emerging, swirling organ. The sounds and rhythms are natural ones, like the wind blowing through the trees, or cicadas on a summer evening. (Audio clip - 132K.)
Listen to the difference, though, when the band makes the transition to the verse. Nothing is simple or natural! The drums hold everything together, but the guitar, organ and vocals all seem to be fighting each other, straining under some heavy load. One organ line stops and starts, playing off the beat, keeping the listener off-balance. Robertson’s guitar crackles while Manuel is singing, and also between his lines, competing for attention. Richard hesitates in his delivery of the vocals, again as if under some stress, lagging a bit behind the beat. Another organ line quietly builds in the background during the first half of the verse, with long, sustained chords, in defiance of everything else going on. The musical message is clear: undercutting the hopeful optimism of the words in the first verse, there are powerful conflicts at work.
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Interesting verses geo. Farmers must be devastated when they are driven to give up their land because I think people are born farmers as they are born gardeners, one can't really 'become' a farmer; it seems to be inate.
farmers still
at the kitchen table we cup our hands around coffee mugs to fight off the chill of fall rains we talk about late harvest and sprouting swaths and the whims of marketing boards money-lenders and mother nature we remember past years with bumper crops and how the north-east quarter always produces but this year the swaths are under water and tough as things seem it's not so bad as Harrisons after their auction last year they moved to the city they say they used to lie awake wondering if the old boss cow made it through the winter if the brockle-faced heifer calved on her own they drive out to check other people's crops on land their grandfather homsteaded stop in at coffee row talk about the weather like they were still here
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I like this one -
You and Your Ilk by Thomas Lux
I have thought much upon who might be my ilk, and that I am ilk myself if I have ilk. Is one of my ilk, or me, the barber who cuts the hair of the blind? And the man crushed by cruelties for which we can't imagine sorrow, who would be his ilk? And whose ilk was it standing around, hands in pockets, May 1933, when 2,242 tons of books were burned? Not mine. So: what makes my ilkness my ilkness? No answers, none forthcoming. To be one of the ilks, that's all I hoped for; to say hello to the mailman, nod to my neighbors, to watch my children climb the stairs of a big yellow bus which takes them to a place where they learn to read and write and eat their lunches from puzzle trays—all around them, amid the clatter and din, amid bananas, bread, and milk. all around them: them and their ilk.
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Boy, Gerard Manley Hopkins sure did know how to put energy and intensity into a poem.
No worst, there is none Gerard Manley Hopkins
"No worst, there is none. Pitched past pitch of grief, More pangs will, schooled at forepangs, wilder wring. Comforter, where, where is your comforting? Mary, mother of us, where is your relief? My cries heave, herds-long; huddle in a main, a chief Woe, world-sorrow; on an age-old anvil wince and sing - Then lull, then leave off. Fury had shrieked 'No ling- -ering! Let me be fell: force I must be brief'.
O the mind, mind has mountains; cliffs of fall Frightful, sheer, no-man-fathomed. Hold them cheap May who ne'er hung there. Nor does long our small Durance deal with that steep or deep. Here! creep, Wretch, under a comfort serves in a whirlwind: all Life death does end and each day dies with sleep."
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I'm thinking about my two grandsons - one is 10 years old and today is the first day of his SATs Exams to see which grade he will be allocated at secondary school.....he was quietly confident this morning....
My other grandson is 10months old and is just full of pure joy.......
Benediction
Bless this little heart, this white soul that has won the kiss of heaven for our earth. He loves the light of the sun, he loves the sight of his mother's face. He has not learned to despise the dust, and to hanker after gold. Clasp him to your heart and bless him. He has come into this land of an hundred cross-roads. I know not how he chose you from the crowd, came to your door, and grasped your hand to ask his way. He will follow you, laughing and talking, and not a doubt in his heart. Keep his trust, lead him straight and bless him. Lay your hand on his head, and pray that though the waves underneath grow threatening, yet the breath from above may come and fill his sails and waft him to the heaven of peace. Forget him not in your hurry, let him come to your heart and bless him.
Rabindranath Tagore
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Honestly, I am rubbish!!!! I posted that poem 'Benediction' because I was thinking about my grandsons, and it was 'On my Mind'.
But I was originally thinking about the Manley Hopkins poem....and its intensity and the comparison with my own favourite poet, on a similar theme, but with a very different more lyrical 'attitude' - attitude????? is that the word?
Closed Path
I thought that my voyage had come to its end at the last limit of my power,---that the path before me was closed, that provisions were exhausted and the time come to take shelter in a silent obscurity.
But I find that thy will knows no end in me. And when old words die out on the tongue, new melodies break forth from the heart; and where the old tracks are lost, new country is revealed with its wonders.
Rabindranath Tagore
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I'm glad you like him too giselle, although I have to admit that I love his face and when I see it unexpectedly, as recently occurred in our daily newspaper, my heart skips a beat.....which is a bit ridiculous at my age.....but I like it.
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Hi Penelope, Thanks for the poem. I received a tome of Tagore long ago and it somehow ended up way, way up high on my bookshelf. Thanks to your post, I've retrieved it and am digging in!
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I have posted this poem before, a while ago, but I am reposting because I think it demonstrates Tagore's deep human understanding and I think any discussion of Tagore is not complete without it. His ability to convey the deeper feelings and meanings going on between these people is amazing in my view. Each time I read it I catch something new.
And Penny, I like Tagore's face too .. but perhaps for not quite the same reason!
A Sudden Encounter
A sudden encounter in a train compartment, just what I thought could never happen.
Before, I used to see her most frequently in red, the red of pomegranate blossoms. Now she was in black silk, the end lifted to her head and circling her face as fair and comely as the dolonchampa. She seemed to have gathered, through that blackness, a deep distance round herself, the distance that is in a mustard-field’s far edge or in a sal forest’s dark kohl. My mind paused, seeing someone I knew touched with the solemnity of the unknown.
Suddenly she put her newspaper down and greeted me. The path for socializing was opened and I started a conversation – ‘How are you? How’s the family?’ And so forth. She kept looking out through the window in a gaze that seemed to be beyond the contamination of near-by days, gave one or two extremely brief replies, left some questions unanswered, let me understand through her hand’s impatient gestures that it was pointless to raise such matters, better to keep quiet.
I was on another seat with her companions. She beckoned me with her fingers to come and sit next to her. I thought it was bold of her to do so and did and she asked. Softly she spoke, her voice shielded by the train’s rumble, ‘Please don’t mind. We’ve no time to waste time. I’ve got to get off at the next station and you’ll go further. Never again shall we meet. I want to hear from your mouth the answer to the question that’s been postponed for so long. Will you speak the truth?’
‘I shall’, said I. And she, still looking out – at the sky – put this question, ‘Those days of ours that are gone – have they gone entirely? Is nothing left?’
For a minute I held my tongue, then replied, ‘The stars of night are all within the deep of the light of day.’
I was bothered with my answer. Had I made it up? She said, ‘Never mind. Now go back to your seat.’ They all got off at the next station; I continued alone.
Rabindranath Tagore from I Won’t Let you Go, Selected Poems Translated by Ketaki Kushari Dyson
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Thank you giselle - Oooooh, I love him. No wonder he won the Nobel Prize for literature in 1913. Just before the great war and all that loss of young life.
Yes, he writes about the nature of love, heartrendingly beautifully, I think. This is the first one which I think seduced me:-
Desire
A fast damp wind blows sharply from the east, sweeping dark-blue clouds on the sunrise-path. Far off, on the Ganga - not a boat! - the sand drifts I sit and wonder: who's where today!
Withered leaves are blown on empty paths. from a distance comes the woodland's mad commotion. The morning birds are silent. Their nests shake. I think continually: where is she today?
Ah, how long she was near me, and I said nothing! And the days went by, one after another. Laughter and jokes, throwing words at each other: within them lurked the heart's intended hints.
If I could have her by me today, I feel I could tell her all I wanted to say. Clouds would cast dark shadows across my words and the wind would lend its wildness to my breath.
From afar it would gather - the stillness before a storm. Clouds, woods riverbanks - all would merge into one. Her loose hair would cascade over her face and her eyes would hold back the dewy drops.
Speeches most solemn, cover life and death, inner longing, like the forest's uproar, vital throbbing - from here to hereafter, hymns of grandeur, high effusive hopes,
huge sadness-shadows, deep absence-pangs, restless desires, locked up, heart concealed, half-formed whispers, not for elaboration, would fill the solitude like clouds heaped on clouds.
As at the end of day, in midnight's mansion the universe displays its planets and stars, so in my heart, freed from laughter and jests, she would perceive infinity's outbursts.
The noise, the games, the merriment would be below; the spirit's tranquil sky would soar above. In light you see but the gambling of a moment; in darkness alone am I myself without end.
How small I was when she left me and went away! How small that farewell,spoken with trivial words! I neither showed her imagination's true realm, nor made her sit in my soul's dark solitude.
If in such privacy, stillness, grand ambience two minds could spend an eternal night together - in the sky no laughter, no sound, no sense of direction, just four loving eyes waking like four stars!
No weariness, no satiety no road-blocks; life expanding from one world to the next! From the strings of twin spirits in full unison a duet would rise to the throne of the limitless.
Ghazipur - 1st May 1888.
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Rainer Maria Rilke's "Time and Again" (and yes, it does sound better in the original German) Time and Again
Time and again, however well we know the landscape of love, and the little church-yard with lamenting names, and the frightfully silent ravine wherein all the others end: time and again we go out two together, under the old trees, lie down again and again between the flowers, face to face with the sky.
Rainer Maria Rilke
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